Why do you give me just One word
Its like you censor yourself to be blurred
That One Word is never the same
I find it to be just so lame,
Why cant the One word be
Love
Cant you see
Your One Word
Will never fly like the bird
It will just be blurred
And never be found
Like the love
that once was profound
I'm sure it was there
love
Just like you said you cared
And now all you give me is just One word
So that you can be blurred...
- A poem by
T.J.Snider
15 comments:
well that ws depressing in a good way :]]
Thanks! lol
and who are you in love with Thomas...? :)
alright, that was really good! the rhyming was cool also! Just think about how you're feeling in your heart, and pour it onto the paper. Even if it takes u more than one draft, do it again and again (especially with poetry). It doesn't have to rhyme at first, just say what you want to say and then sculpt it later. The emotion will show through and make the reader really feel. Put your agony and despair into your art, and let the reader feel a bit of that for you. And yeah, WHO ARE U IN LOVE WITH???
Kenz- Could this me Mackenzie Watson? You have a blog!! Sweet
Kelsey- That was such good adivse thanks!!
yes, shockingly, it is I...haha
BUT ANSWER THE QUESTION!!!
Answer the question...to do or not to do...
TO DO! TO DO TO DO TO DO!!!
"no one is perfect until you fall in love with them"
A quote Moriah e-mailed me once. Well first off Jesus is perfect and so is God and I do love Them but...I'm getting off topic.
Who do YOU think is perfect Thomas?
In other words...
WHO ARE YOU IN LOVE WITH??????
haha wow wow...pushy pushy!!!
Yes God is prefect
Thats a cool quote
but i cant say who i think is prefect...
Thomas! Get your act together man! Who tickles your fancy?
I love how just because i posted a random poem about someone...now you think im in love haha
SO you admit it's about someone!
And no, it's actually not because of the poem that I ask. It's because, while we're on the subject, I know you love SOMEONE, and it's about time I figure out who it is. Ha!
its not love its more like
a sad and lonly crush
well it's a shame it's so lonely over there. but it wouldn't be if there were friends there to support you. Friends...who you TOLD! lol
lol
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