Jul 30, 2007

Ah Tonight

Was a blast! ha ha

Swimming...
That one game with the bell??? ha ha
UNO
Speaking Suggestive French with Kelsey!! ha ha

wow
I'm just so glad God has blessed me with so many wonderful people in my life! :)

Well now I'm in my bed and its comfy

Tomorrow will be..well i dont know sad/good

Right now I'm listing to a good song kinda my feeling and i never listen to rap but it kinda is...Beautiful Girls by i think Sean Kingston?

well see ya

Jul 26, 2007

That Little boy who rang the doorbell

That Little boy who rang the doorbell...His name was Ethan

Well he used to be a friend of mine and he is about i don't know 12 now...

Well I haven't talked with his older bro he is my age but we have a bad past, He changed his life and hang out with wrong people, and i changed my life and am now as happy can be with the right friends!

So Ethan has been calling me and calling me for days and days now, But i just didn't answer because i mean face it, Who wants a little kid calling them to ask if they can come "play" while there busy... But i still didn't pick up...So this morning he calls and i don't answer and he leaves the same old message "Hey Thomas Its me, Can i come over?"

It gets to the point were I'm getting annoyed!! So i just ignore it...

Well my mom gets home and right after that the doorbell rings...

I was down stares chatting with Kelsey on email arguing about posting a new post on my blog (so happy now Kelsey!! haha)

My mom yells down stares from the door " Thomas, Ethan is here"

My jaw dropped!! I was soo shocked that this kid whom i dint even know why he still likes me arrives on my doorstep!!

So my mom let him in and it turns out he wanted to "play" but i didn't because i mean i used to be best friend with this kids bro and now i have moved on and got new friends.

So i was being nice and was like oh how did you get here...?

It turns out he skateboarded all the way from his house to my house (which is a long distance)

I started feeling bad, but i mean i still didn't want this kid at my house uninvited!!

So i made up something and said we had to go out and get my moms computer

He kinda shrugged and then i felt really mean

But we gave him a ride home

It doesn't end there...

After we gave him a ride home he kept on calling and calling! I was a bit freaked out! Thinking "WHAT DOES THIS KID WANT"

I didn't answer

But tomorrow will be a new day...and hopefully he wont arrive at my house. =/

Jul 24, 2007

Layout

Oh and by the way

Hope you like the new layout!

Thanks comment!

Back to my Life

So as you may know I have shut myself off from the world the past few days to read Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows and remain spoiler free! Which i am delighted to say I have been and it was an AMAZING book...Really if you have not read it yet go buy it and stay locked up in your room until you finish it!

Although i did not finish it as fast as some people "cough" "cough" "Unnatural child 1" "cough"

I was very amazed at how good this book was! J.K. Did such a good job and out did her self!

I am also delighted to inform you that J.K Rowling will be making a Hogwarts Encyclopedia! YAY

Well now I have to go back to my life again and not stay up tell 2:00 every mourning reading 2-5 chapters in Deathly Hallows

Perhaps i might make up time in writing at that time instead...

well I'm off perhaps to write her that poem!

=]

Jul 16, 2007

Chapter 4-Tragic Encounter and other things about my book...

So I have came to realization, that Chapter 4- A tragic Encounter is not nearly as long as i would like it to be so in other words you guys didn't get to see that much ha ha sorry...

But i am going to make it longer (I'm just now starting chapter 3) so far i have 28 pages! I'm proud of that ha ha

I am really thinking about cutting out the whole swim team bit...but that would be hard to get around, and make the plot work... Any suggestions?? HELP!!!

Me and my Mom had a wonderful talk about my book in regards to making John (The main character) Move from Australia to England due to his parents conflict and then getting called back to Australia by this ring he finds near the lake which he later diapers into...But i don't want to give to much away because that would be spoiling the book!

So please suggestions on what i should do about the whole swim team!!!


Thanks!

Jul 14, 2007

Harry Potter Review! About time!

SPOILERS!!!!
SPOILERS


So sorry it took me so long to post this i just haven't felt like blogging the past days!

Harry Potter is a magical film, This one that just came out i found the most realistic to actual human instances as opposed to fiction. I really enjoyed how they filmed this movie because you saw it close in person the real faces of the actors, Such as Dudley wearing what looks to be some gangster outfit ha ha. This movie was brilliant on how it made Harry's rage look not as forced out as i thought It was going to be, and the whole scene with him being possessed! Was amazing. I really enjoyed how in this movie you really got to see the relationships between the characters, Ron and Hermione started to show a more grown up crushing sort of relationship, And Harry and Cho was brilliant, the kiss couldn't have been done any better! The only draw back on this movie were some flaws such as getting the plot mixed around and having Cho me the "Sneak" instead of Chos friend, All in all i really loved this movie and just might think its my new favorite so i would give it a 9 out of 10 star rating and if you haven't seen it i most defiantly recommend you go and see it!
So this is an ex script of my book i was thinking of cutting out the whole swim team thing and i need our help what do you think? Any way enjoy the ex script and please please comment on room for improvement

Thanks


Chapter 4-A Tragic Encounter


None of Johns swim team knew he would become a legend but of course he and his coach knew he would, each and everyday John would get gradually faster and faster at his swim times. Every day he would get more used to his gills and so far no one has seen them, although there have been many close encounters not only with his gills but with his webbed hands and feet too, many swimmers have sworn the saw his feet and gills but every time he comes out of the water it appears he does not.
"Blimey!" said Johns coach in amazement. "What is it?" John had said after finishing a set of eight fifty's. "John Calming you have just won yourself an Australian Record!" John shot out of the water with a big cheer, but not realizing he had his gift, his coach questioned the very strange scars that appeared under Johns lower jaw bone.
"Why John what's that right there are, are you hurt!" said his couch staring at his gills. "No, no coach it's nothing really its not, don't worry about it. Now what's me next set?" said john trying to hide his gills. "Well lets see hear, you finished the five one hundreds right?" "Yes I did a long time ago" John said "OK and the eight fifty's, right?" "Yes sir!" John said again. "Well then it looks like you done for the day!" "Sweet thanks coach I will see you next week" said John as he was getting out of the pool. "John! Um well let me know if well you know" Johns coach was pointing under his jaw bone. "Well if you know, those get worse"
John looked at him with a questioned look on his face, while thinking "what if he knows!" and "what if I get kicked off of the swim team! I have to go tell ma!" John raced home as fast as he could, but little did he know... he would be walking into something that would change his life drastically forever.
John walked into his house shouting "Ma, Ma are you home?" but then he realized he wasn't the only one shouting in the house. He herd yells and crashes echoing though out the living room. But then he found it was coming out of his parent's room. He ran frantically down the long hallway not knowing what he would witness next, he slowly turned his head into the doorway. Just then he saw his mother's body slam to the ground and saw his father standing over her.
In rage and despair John jumped on his father and started punching and screaming at him. "YOU, YOU DID THIS TO HER! IT'S ALL YOUR FAULT!" John's Father knocked him off of him and walked out of the house leaving John on the floor, crying next to his mother who was badly injured laying there.

One Word



Why do you give me just One word

Its like you censor yourself to be blurred

That One Word is never the same

I find it to be just so lame,

Why cant the One word be

Love

Cant you see

Your One Word

Will never fly like the bird

It will just be blurred

And never be found

Like the love

that once was profound

I'm sure it was there

love

Just like you said you cared

And now all you give me is just One word

So that you can be blurred...


- A poem by

T.J.Snider

Jul 11, 2007

Review of last night!

Last Night Was AMAZING!


Waiting in the movie theater and haveing a duel with to college chicks was SO much fun!


Tom got sent to askaban!! He was a bad wizard haha
We ended up loseign our sets, but in the end a wipped out my wand and used an "Unforgivabel" curse to get them out of our sets! haha



There were sooo many of us there! It was fun

It took forever for the movie to start (Im thinking its because we got there at 8 and the movie started at 12 haha)

In the end it was soooo worth the wait


Ill write a review of the movie tomorrow, seeing as that i still want to type in my book!

Jul 10, 2007

HARRY POTTER!!

I'M going to go see it!!! like soon!!! I CAN NOT WAIT Yea so im going to the midnight premiere and its going to be intense!!


Ill let you know how it is! =]

Jul 7, 2007

The Long Adventures of today!

Today!

Wow well it was a fun day

awoke at the time of noon

then went to Pearl Street! (For the second time)

Went to Urban Outfitters and got a really cool T-Shirt! (It was also $30) Shows how much the world is over coasted! ha ha

walked Pearl Street

went to church (Really fun!)

Came home and watched Harry Potter!

Got ready for bed and got face wash in my eye (which still stings at this very moment!) Ouch!!

and now i lay hear in my bed getting ready for a long night of writing in my book Yippee!

Such a good way to end they day =]

Jul 6, 2007

Freazing

So I lay here Freezing my butt off trying to guess why. Iv thought to myself "Could I be getting sick? Or if its just the cold air coming out of the air vents that are set on 65 because the up stares is hot when the basement is like a freezer!

I'm going through writers block, i hate to admit it but i find myself suffering from not getting my thought out of my head onto paper. So i guess this is why I'm blogging instead of making progress on my book. Lets hope this doesn't replace my time for typing my book!
(Trust me it wont)

Welcome

Hey guys so Welcome! In new to all this and i just figured im a writer so why not blog about my book and how hard it is! (really its not that hard)