So I have came to realization, that Chapter 4- A tragic Encounter is not nearly as long as i would like it to be so in other words you guys didn't get to see that much ha ha sorry...
But i am going to make it longer (I'm just now starting chapter 3) so far i have 28 pages! I'm proud of that ha ha
I am really thinking about cutting out the whole swim team bit...but that would be hard to get around, and make the plot work... Any suggestions?? HELP!!!
Me and my Mom had a wonderful talk about my book in regards to making John (The main character) Move from Australia to England due to his parents conflict and then getting called back to Australia by this ring he finds near the lake which he later diapers into...But i don't want to give to much away because that would be spoiling the book!
So please suggestions on what i should do about the whole swim team!!!
Thanks!
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Which he diapers into? And please let me know what "diapering into" means...
lol that sounds funny
sorry...bad spelling
diapears into, gah i still think i spelled that wrong
but he gets draged into this lake by a creature of some sort.
well, i'd really have to know the whole premis and who your character is. But cutting a big section of a book out like that is hard. I did that once, and lost about half my work. Rather than cut it all out, maybe try and rework it. Play word smith for a little bit. It's a good idea, but if you're not happy with it, you should do something about it.
oh, I got it.
don't forget to keep answering me and my comments on the post One Word
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