Jan 9, 2008

A Poem- Argue

Sometimes I say I love you...

But the yelling of your voice is what stings my ear

The throw the punch

the angled rage

Twisted in figgur eights

Why Does it end like this

The Argue the Virtue

Non Tones that interest me

Be Godly

That's all it needs

Sometimes I say I love you

Followed by a cry to her

Eternal suffering reaches a doom

with a huge boom

Stuck in the middle of the war breaking on

Life must go on

this ever so hard desert of pain

Is the opposite of rain

the rage the anger

non of glory

The Pain the Tears the HATE

Seek Thy good for eternal glory

7 comments:

Kelsey said...

Ok, and who is THIS about now?

TJsnider said...

No One
Thats the joy of poetry

Kenz said...

I like it Thomas!
and yes, I agree with you ;)

Kenz said...

I hope you're feeling better poor Tommay Boy!!! Be well!
~praying for you

Anonymous said...

Well then, what stimulated these feelings?

Unnatural Child #1 said...

Wow, that came out of nowhere. I can't tell if you're talking about yourself or about a girl or God, but I like it. I think it's not supposed to be the sort of poem that's easy to follow - it's abstract. Nice :)

Anonymous said...

i like your mom.